Hello Amol,
I am sure everyone here agrees that it is well written. After reading your project description, I fully understand what you had to undertake in the construction project. However, this won't pass the application because it is not up to PMI's format standard. Overall, it is good but needs some polishing.
1. Your project description is too long, PMI only allows 550 characters (not words, characters)
2. You did not outline which tasks belong to the 5 domains.
This master guide will help you fine-tune your application. Cheers
www.project-management-prepcast.com/how-...-the-pmp-application