I am not able to understand how should I describe my work,
what I did earlier is I share four projects where I shared the different work and responsibilities I bare, some of them are as follows :
Project 1: Managed the project of an estimated $10M for a Britannia F&B plant, helped developed the machinery which enabled the client to automate the biscuit manufacturing process.
- I ensure the company obtains the best possible pricing.
- Determine and minimize the risk of the buyout process.
- Reduced the cost by 15% annually. - Negotiate, analyze and prepare a purchase order agreement and cost control budgets.
Project 2: Initiated a project worth $100M for the Delhi Airport Metro Line.
The scope of the project was to reduce the travel time between the Airpot and the Railway station.
- Reduced travel time by 1 hour(the metro takes only 22 mins) and saved 8% cost annually.
- Negotiate, analyze and prepare a purchase order agreement and cost control budgets.
- Selected the project team and ensure that they understand all aspects of the project scope.
I thought they would look into this and understand my work, but now after getting their response and after seeing the other posts like me I have modified it, but I have created a general statement,
(IN) Met with key stakeholders to define the high-level scope and requirements and initiated a project worth $100M for the Delhi Airport Metro Line.
(P) Developed the scope document and created WBS, finalized schedule plan for the project.
(E) Performed qualitative analysis and quantitative analysis, managed project resources, finalize the project team.
(M&C) Monitor the scope, control scope creeping, updated project requirements.
(C) Assign the ownership of the end product to the operations, and created lesson learned documents for future reference.
my question is, will the above statement looks fine, I mean it is a general statement nothing specific about the project, should I submit this or I should modify it differently, please suggest.